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Strawberry_Princess
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since 2003-08-19
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0 posted 2003-08-19 12:58 PM


My dear child,
Every day i see the power in you
from day to day you play about not knowing the dangers ahead
my dear child you have much to learn
yet depend upon me for I am your mother
I will guide you through life and protect you from the evils of the world.

My dear child

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-19 01:48 AM


ahh . . . I know this well . . .
until the day they spurt their
wings and take flight . . .
Beautiful
Welcome to PIP!
for being so young, you write as if you know
Sorry to have missed your entrance
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-19-2003 02:00 AM).]

idonthaveaname
Junior Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 15

2 posted 2003-08-19 02:59 AM


good poem.. i am on the other end- my mother still takes care of me and protects me even though I'm out of the house and in a career.. you'd be suprised how much children understand this..
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-08-19 11:08 AM


Only a loving parent could write these words...

Welcome to Passions!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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