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Strawberry_Princess
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0 posted 2003-08-19 12:41 PM



I love

I love the air
I love the trees
I love the flowers that home the bees

Every day i awake and see my love at stake
Trash dirt mildew it's everywhere.
It's even in your hair.

So stop the pollution
It's creating a commotion

For my love...


-Kim Klide


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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-19 12:43 PM


WONDERFUL write, doll!

Welcome to PIP

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-08-19 02:18 AM


Your youth is refreshing,
in so much as your poem was stifling.

You certainly got the point across!!!

I hope you will stay awhile,
I look forward to reading more of your work.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-08-19 09:47 AM


Kim~
Welcome to Passions~

How appealing to see your love for our Mother Earth ...
a breath of fresh air for sure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-08-19 09:54 AM


Strawberry
My favorite jam, enjoyed.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2003-08-19 10:25 AM


Welcome to Passions!  I do believe we think you're going to enjoy yourself, and we will enjoy your poetry.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-08-26 11:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is a very beautifully heartaching debut, sweet friend, I too am a fond tree-hugger and I cry for Mother Nature as she is the true monarch of Earth and the true beauty of this world! I pray she will be saved too sweet friend, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
7 posted 2003-08-26 11:33 PM


Great write and read my friend


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