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Open Poetry #28

Mask of Crow

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-18 11:33 PM

You murderer

wearing mask of crow

slipping through
pale night your
dirty wings unfold.

amazing, quite,
you play the part well.

sweltering
mad moisture
I
grip

you
take a sip,

murderer.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-18 11:47 PM

nicely written,,,

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-08-18 11:48 PM

The darkness of this poem is awesome. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

goodhrtd
Junior Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 12

3 posted 2003-08-19 12:02 PM

I love your style. Good stuff...

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2003-08-19 12:13 PM

These nights have been sweltering ...
           and I've heard the fluttering of wings.

        A mistaken breeze ...

               I hope someday will enlighten the the dark of your nights.

               - in my prayers

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-19 02:05 PM

beautiful darkness Meg,let's bump this out of the shadows..

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2003-08-19 02:07 PM

thanks shadow bumper..I needed to read someone else's darkness, and it was just perfect. beautiful. I 'dug' it

insanity is not a crime

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2003-08-20 09:05 PM

oooo.

back to the top.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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