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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-08-18 09:59 PM


“IN MISTY CANDLELIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If once in misty candlelight
my lips were to touch
upon yours, and if your sigh
would be of needs, my
deepest whispers would
flow gently into your ear…

Words of passion would flow, of
how fingers feather soft upon
skin smooth would tease, as
chills ran from top to bottom
of your spine…

In this misty candlelight of
tempting brew my offer
of delicate wine to taste is
with passionate desire, as would
be my lips when they meet
with yours…
~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-18 10:06 PM


very nice write,,,

     


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-08-18 10:20 PM


Bill,
Now what gal could resist that? Enjoyed  

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2003-08-18 10:27 PM


Oh you sweet talker you. Just add a little soft music you are all set for romance.
Bon-Bon

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-08-18 10:31 PM


As always BC, beautifully romantic.

Hugs, Marti

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-08-18 10:33 PM


skin smooth would tease, as
chills ran from top to bottom
of your spine

can u guess where i am ticklish?

Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2003-08-19 12:12 PM


Bill...This is so very romantic. Soft and light as your kiss in this poem. You know how to make chills run up and down the spine without the touch of your lips. Wonderful  poem. ***Ivy Rose
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7 posted 2003-08-19 01:04 AM


**hugging you** for this beautiful poem that made me think of just how passionate I still am about my lover. I was beginning to wonder if the distance had gotten the best of us.

Lovely you as always..

Dear John,
IF YOU'RE TIRED OF PRETENDING..
THEN WHY DID YOU GO BACK INTO HIDING?



littlewing
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8 posted 2003-08-19 01:44 AM


ahhh and a like a delicate wine this
is to be savored . . .
xxoo

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2003-08-19 02:07 AM


In this misty candlelight of
tempting brew my offer
of delicate wine to taste is
with passionate desire, as would
be my lips when they meet
with yours…

Passionate wine, indeed BC~

Now where did I leave my glass?  

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-08-19 02:42 AM


very sweet!
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11 posted 2003-08-19 09:41 AM


BillCharles~
You write the romance that literally dances the page~
BEAUTIFUL is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Pilgrimage
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12 posted 2003-08-19 10:17 AM


Goodness. You give me a double-dose of romance every time!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-08-19 10:27 AM


For some unimagineable reason, I found myself puckering up...


Linda

LeeJ
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14 posted 2003-08-19 10:47 AM


ahhhhh, swooning here, drew me right into the center of love...filled up to the brim with reassurance and the moment becomes one...filled with all things....lovely, dreamy, passionate...very good write, cause I felt it...incredibly embracing
garysgirl
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15 posted 2003-08-19 12:07 PM


Bill, Mr. Romance, you, have done it again.....
look at all your ladies swooning over your words.  LOL

Very good writing as always, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-08-20 03:06 PM


Beautifully romantic... I like this very much! *S*
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17 posted 2003-08-20 07:21 PM


nice write
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