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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-18 05:15 PM


Images from screen so small
young child, I cry for us
be it religion, or culture
which caused you this pain
I turn my back upon it time again

Woman, without voice, consent
forced by another, blood relation
do your screams not echo
through your mothers mind
child, woman, survivor,
they do mine.

I could scream along the streets for you
this minute, this hour, this life
mutilation of sexuality
as she who loves you chooses marriage
and what do you have left
when such choices are not your own?

Child, no holy religion, nor life practice
should base beliefs upon this, fools
appauled am I, sweet thing, cry not
fight the cloudy rules of such disrespect
child bearer, you are woman, not meat.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-08-18 05:20 PM


This is breathtaking work.

Cold hands means a warm heart

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-08-18 08:37 PM


gem . . . perfect stanza

do your screams not echo
through your mothers mind
child, woman, survivor,
they do mine.

Godddd . . .  
this write intrigues me so
I will not feign knowing exactly
what or who you mean here . . .
but I know you will elaborate for me?
please . . . *smile*
xxoo
I am losing my touch  uh ohh    

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA
3 posted 2003-08-18 08:40 PM


take that as a good thing

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Wind
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4 posted 2003-08-18 08:42 PM


being me..I have my ideas. good job Gem..really really good job.

insanity is not a crime

Wind
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5 posted 2003-08-18 08:50 PM


oh..now I see how it is you must be paaranoid miss..always checking login that's a good thing though

Gem's brain: I wonder who's here..what if they are after me???



insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-18-2003 08:51 PM).]

gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA
6 posted 2003-08-19 08:45 AM


http://www.channel4.com/health/microsites/D/day_never_forget/index.html   it was a programme on tv, about female circumcision..in which country I'm not sure.oh, I cried, wanted to hit things. the poor children, went through so much, one thing can have such repercussions, death, disease, physical and mental pain. proper surgical procedure it was not. held down being yelled at to shut up, yes. If you'd have watched it, it was heartbreaking and barbaric. and all for what?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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