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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-18 04:27 PM



Indescribable

how can
a woman
with more
words to
utter, define
and express
find something
so indescribable
but that
is how
I found you

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-08-18 04:32 PM


Ahh, he took your breath away!
Indescribable equal to "of another world" ... probably!
Great!
Love, Margherita

S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
2 posted 2003-08-18 04:42 PM


Pardon my assumption, but I hope you find a few words before he mistakes your silence for something else . . .
(Enjoying you, short and sweet, as usual.)


s.a.g.

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3 posted 2003-08-19 12:33 PM


That's the only way...at least it's the only way you know for sure...must say, can't say, must tell, can't describe....yes, exactly that.

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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-08-19 12:39 PM


sigh...
love it.
made my cheeks red.

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5 posted 2003-08-19 01:02 AM


sighing here..
lovely work..
and lovely to see you again, Lady.

Dear John,
IF YOU'RE TIRED OF PRETENDING..
THEN WHY DID YOU GO BACK INTO HIDING?



passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-08-19 05:08 AM


I like this, lots!
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7 posted 2003-08-19 10:37 AM


*smile*

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2003-08-19 01:50 PM


sigh
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9 posted 2003-08-19 01:52 PM


worried that if I sigh..i might cause a disturbance in here

insanity is not a crime

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10 posted 2003-08-20 01:52 AM


Wow Helen, that rocked, reminded me of stay, go, stay, go, can't breathe, can't talk, etc. hope that made sense?
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11 posted 2003-08-20 03:54 PM


Yes. *S* Sometimes the dictionary just fails us. *S*

I like this very much! *S*

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