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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-18 01:05 PM




It's so hard to say those three little words
or admitting that your falling.
Hearing your voice on the line for hours
Laying in your arms
Hopeing you will never leave
Looking in your deep blue eyes
Sharing your joys and sorrows.
When you picked me up in your arms and
pressed your lips to mine
Then whispered gently in my ear, "I love you"
I had fallin' many times but when my heart
pounds against your chest
It puts my body to the test.
I know time flys and when spring ends
We will say our goodbyes and I know we will
still be friends.
Summer flings will never compare with the
love we have shared
So I am simply saying what I meant to say many times before
I am deeply in love with you and I could not ask for more.



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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-08-18 02:51 PM


beautiful write,,,

     


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-08-18 04:56 PM


This is very romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2004-07-05 02:43 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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