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You Won't See The Watcher On The Traveler's Path
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You Won't See The Watcher On The Traveler's Path |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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the sun sets alone the night hunts for dreams' meanings dawn hides their secrets © 2003 by icebox [This message has been edited by icebox (08-18-2003 01:00 PM).] |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
icebox, A great way to describe that deja-vu feeling after a particularly vivid dream. Thank you, --Matt Give what you can. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes I have rather complicated thoughts and find it hard to articulate...you never have that problem and that makes me so glad. Love ya oh Icy one! Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Maybe if you catch a glimpse of a dream at dawn, you will know the watcher for a minute before he's gone. Your poetry is always thought filled, and fills me with thought. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You seem to manage to keep in touch. You...grin, I don't know. I always end up feeling both impressed and annoyed when I read you. (Impressed with you and annoyed by ME, btw..) and why am I explaining that to YOU? You already know everything! Sheeesh. You remind me of a certain Captain...  Enjoyed this. Even if I don't act like it. *chuckle* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well done. Winged dreams keep flying I cannot follow, stumbling in the gray wet dawn. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's like rainbows Rainbows are ribbons Of light fantastic tied to the rain Before and after Bows in the morning Before Bows in the evening After |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Minister Joe ~ Never thought of it that way. Thank you for the thought! Susan Caldwell ~ Well, I did have a complicated thought once, but then I remembered what a recent Vice President once said, "The mind is a terrible thing." So, I have tried to avoid such things since then. *grin* Martie ~ Well, the Watcher is always in the shadows. *smile* serenity blaze ~ And which Captain would that be? Oh god, not Captain Kangaroo I hope! Pilgrimage ~ Ahhh...winged dreams offer the soul the opportunity for flight. Toerag ~ True and rainbows are like mandalas, always turning back on themselves just beyond the edge of awareness. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Just me here..enjoying your work again. Second time tonight. I'm loving this. You write beautiful and thoughtfully thoughtful thoughts, Sir.  Dear John, |
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idonthaveaname Junior Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 15 |
that was amazing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the sun always sets alone, regardless of how many people are watching, doesn't it? |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What a mind you have! You make my brain hurt in ponder and wonder. Brain pain is a good thing...I am stretching my mind. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful!! ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how beautiful...and he is always watching, isn't he...Lovely thoughts you write |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
damn it ice..this is just...damn it |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Gave me an idea, ya did . . . /pip/Forum81/HTML/001168.html thanks s.a.g. |
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