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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-18 09:32 AM



A  Pick-Me-Up

There it was
waiting for me
one line
and a " wish you were mine"

How reading me
"gives him smiles for days"
and leaving me a hug
that stays

An early morning pick-me-up
to lift me pleasingly
in thought...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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ctowen
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1 posted 2003-08-18 10:10 AM


S                   G
   M             N
       I      I
           L

[This message has been edited by ctowen (08-18-2003 10:11 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-08-18 10:12 AM


Isn't it nice Craig, to get a surprise from someone you don't expect it from...just someone who appreciates your words...it
was a very nice morning welcome for me.

Thank you
Hope you are well.
Hugs
M


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-08-18 10:17 AM


WynterGal~
You're such a keeper ... doesn't surprise me at all that one would wish you were his~

Love ya' gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-08-18 10:23 AM


You deserve it!

Very nice.

Susan

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5 posted 2003-08-18 10:29 AM


h yes, just like my morning cup of coffee, over looking the river, the peacefulness and serenity of it all. thoughts of wishing to share it all with someone

Good write M
oh yea your hug

((((((((( M )))))))))

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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6 posted 2003-08-18 10:36 AM


Maureen, it sounded like it was a very nice
pick me up. You deserve it, sweet friend.
Here's another hug, even if it is only from me......
      
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-08-18 10:37 AM




Thank you Marge...

but I am not all that easy to get along with...so it is that old saying be careful what you wish for... Of course I didn't tell him that...

Susan, I deserve exactly what I get ...and sometimes I am lucky enough to be on the "good" receiving end.
Thank you
M

bernie you are too much...and  I have to thank you for the hug and hope no one is talking about us behind our backs...

"laughing" here

that was a good one, ya know?
hugs back
M

HopeS
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8 posted 2003-08-18 11:09 AM


yes a heart tonic indeed
pick me up fulfilling the need

Hope

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-08-18 11:11 AM


just someone reading my poetry site...
leaving a few words in my guestbook..
always a surprise since I rarely have any visitors...and those poems are so old.

Nice to see you, Hope.
(I think biancas is dead...sad but true)

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