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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-08-18 07:49 AM

summarizing the open window of an empty room
the breath of red rose lingers alive, vaporous, and erotic
communing with giddiness, and the mystifying
part of each other, rendering a solar orbit of unity
enveloping what the world lacks.

dressed in the splendor of similar bodies of portly flesh, white laced dreams, thinkly spun
evoking a vivid sunbeam, sorting consciousness
illuminated paired hands innumerably transfixing
the deepened eyes of populous filling photographic plates

have you noticed the finches gathering and rising, multiplying?
from a fiery thread of the forest…thick and plush
like courage from the heart stamping an album at all costs
embracing with a friendly hand and well lubricating spring

enchantment beats with a wish and pure moments for centuries
there, unrestrained by a narrator’s sense
the world becomes stable and unlimited making love
I have seen these comforts increase its treasures

by something which intervenes, reclaiming right to be
ceaselessly, interpreting a soul’s lost altitudes
simply, filling the yawn of entities of the day
where tragedies grow wings and dissipate!

some last extreme of grace without thought for time,
careers essential insights, not counting events
but the revisions we make….with patience
thought, and devotion to work, an unseen energy
deliciously portrays spiritual aspirations
bringing forth thoughts, descriptions convincing….

turning the page and charming the mind, heart and soul
leaning compassion releases a charming tyrant most beautiful
imposing support, direction within, a proper recognition
of love, and spiritual aspiration…the guiding art, voluptuous
through these eyes come the truth which implies passions of the mind
we are weak, and in that weakness sings and bears witness
the positive knowledge where ardent years become a quill of matrimony...unspoken...unbroken
bronzed in a place where I found you.....

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-08-18 06:03 PM

Enjoyed your poem very much, you penned some great images and phrases.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-08-18 06:16 PM

enchantment beats with a wish and pure moments for centuries
there,

this line really empressed the write to me,,

a over all wonderful read,,

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-08-18 06:41 PM

"and in that weakness sings and bears witness
the positive knowledge where ardent years become a quill of matrimony...unspoken...unbroken
bronzed in a place where I found you....."

Wonderful!! Simply exquisite writing!
So very much enjoyed Lee.
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-08-19 10:11 AM

new poem, new guy...thank you all for your comments

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