Karaoke Certainty (people watcher challenge)

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-08-18 02:51 AM

She licked her finger
turned the page
knowing
eyes were following
acrylic nails
done like the French
wavered lines
and lack of gloss
boasted
discount at the mall--
and her shoes squeaked "cost."

Bubble-wrapped
across the breasts
tube-top leaves
the lines beneath
imagining
that young firm flesh
loosely locked--
impressioning
a grid
a table
made too square
as the button
of her jeans
opened in the beckoning,
beckoned to us
down...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-18 04:15 AM

Awesome..

I saw it.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-08-18 10:06 AM

youre not gonna stop there are ya????
this begs for more ....
ok ok..so I am always poetically insatiable.

Work that imagery baby

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-08-18 10:08 AM

yummy...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-18 10:15 AM

an interesting write, one I can relate to
and more...
Hey I had this terrific email, almost completed when I hit a key( one I don't know) and it went "poof" and I was too tired to redo it...so you will hear from me later Karen, and thank you.

~smiles
M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-08-18 10:21 AM

Hey, I wanted more to!!

Excellent people watching! Don't cha just love it? I could spend hours doing it...

Susan

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-08-18 07:13 PM

Thanks for reading.

This lady wasn't even singing at the time, just browsing through those books to make her selection(s)--but not an eye was on the stage--everyone was watching HER...

a very compelling young lady indeed.

Glad you thought so too.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2003-08-31 03:03 AM

Hm...I thought I had replied to this one...

Ya know?...no one pens a portrait quite like you.
You truly ARE amazing...

Love ya, lady..
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2003-08-31 03:48 AM

Sounds like this Karaoke lady had her share of 'watchers' looking on!! Great one, full of sensuality, and now one question: could she sing?? Loved it...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2003-08-31 05:01 AM

Heck.. this lady don't need to go on stage!

I saw it too Luscious

Keeping it.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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