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You are my dad

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 08-17-2003 11:22 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise


Although you are not biologically mine, I love you just the same.
You have showed strength and courage.
You were not the one to blame.
You have given me love.
Although I didn't want to see.
You never gave up.
You have always believed in me.
Even through are worst times.
You have always been there.
You never gave up on me.
Before I just didn't care.
Now I know what you were trying to do.
Just to be a part of my life.
I am thankful that you could be.
Even through all of our strife.
Although I may not have always shown it.
Or a lot less than I should.
I love you more.
Than any daughter could.


[This message has been edited by Tequilia_Sunrise (08-18-2003 12:30 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 08-17-2003 11:24 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

This is such a sweet poem. Made me smile.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 08-18-2003 10:17 AM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

This is far to wise for words... My son, who is in the same position you are, read this, and said there was nothing else that could be added to make it better...
Your Dad is one of the luckiest men in the world to have you love him like this.
Great Job

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


3 posted 08-18-2003 10:48 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

a few minor corrections and you would have a perfect poem... Beautifully written and expressed...
M

biologically
believed
our worst times ( not are)
didn't

use the edit button next to the  email envelope and you can make the corrections..if you want
Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 08-18-2003 12:31 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Im glad you enjoyed this poem, and thankx nakdthoughts for the advice.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 07-05-2004 02:45 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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