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Open Poetry #28

A portrait of a friend

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-08-17 11:14 PM

She’s dribbled paint and broken rhyme,
full of simplicity and chaos.
Her essence hangs in Guggenheim
on Pollock’s canvas.

She seems enticing from a distance.
Admire her, but don’t get close!
Just one more step and in an instant,
the thread of Ariadne's lost.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (08-17-2003 11:22 PM).]

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

1 posted 2003-08-17 11:20 PM

Oh how very interesting ... your words make me want to SEE her.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-08-17 11:21 PM

It makes me want to picture who you speak of this poem does. I really enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-09-03 04:12 PM

Very good!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-09-03 08:03 PM

Well done.
Crystal

mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

5 posted 2003-09-20 11:57 AM

"She’s dribbled paint and broken rhyme,
full of simplicity and chaos."

ah, fabulous imagery leading in...i can see it now.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-09-20 02:51 PM

Andrey, I really enjoyed this portrait post.
Keep the brushes full.

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