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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-17 07:55 PM



I have shown you love with caring and sharing
with great understanding and compassion

So darling what have you to complain?

Well yes you have presented me with all your
love and you surely have shared but many
times without compassion

I don't understand compassion?

I have always given you my whole heart and been
kind and considerate to others

perhaps you have but?

many times you seem to be in another world
and not know  that I'm your one n only

oh my darling how can you ever feel this way?

I always wait many minutes for you to get ready
to go out I always open doors and help you of
with your coat and hold the chair as you set

yes you do but I just feel empty?

maybe it's just that I don't hear you say the
words I long to hear

I agree my lovely lady?

From now on my darling i will say and mean it from
the bottom of my heart, I LOVE YOU and I shall tell
you this each and every lasting day.

     


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-08-17 09:37 PM



...And, I love you too!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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2 posted 2003-08-17 09:50 PM


It is always a joy when someone says "I Love You."
Bon-Bon

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Saluting with misty eyes
3 posted 2003-08-17 10:10 PM


Lovely words to a lovely lady...
It can't get too much better than this.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-17 10:14 PM


I enjoyed the dialogue between you and your beloved. Open communication keeps the love alive!


EA

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