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Snuggle the Soul |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Snuggle The Soul I sit in the silence of my thoughts where reluctance has expired reaching out trying to recapture those hours lost in a name behind words. I have been disguised too long, betrayed once too often but still, I have rainbow eyes colored in memory... wanting something more The blues deepest when in your presence, eye to eye ... the greens answered by lips silencing their questions, the grays blending with the starry night lost on you and the power of the feel. It is with intent and purpose to hang my words in the window of the mind, watching them slowly as they evaporate on the other side of green~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-17-2003 07:08 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is with intent and purpose to hang my words in the window of the mind, watching them slowly as they evaporate on the other side of green~~ So many colors of emotion... and such pretty poetry M~ as always~ |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"but still, I have rainbow eyes colored in memory" what a wonderful line  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I have been disguised too long, betrayed once too often but still, I have rainbow eyes colored in memory... wanting something more ***************************** Awesome lines. This was thoroughly enjoyed. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
there is darkness to this, or is it the new photo i'm seeing along with it,.....deep and real good |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oooh.... and I know this is unasked for advice, but I loved this one so much? especially? ESPECIALLY the last line-- oh I will think of this one always as: "on the other side of green..." smile. summed it up nicely, and STILL left possibilities... brava, lady. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"but still, I have rainbow eyes colored in memory"...--I especially enjoyed those lines. Oh, those misty watercolor memories!  EA P.S. Like your new photo! It has a mysterious look to it!  [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-17-2003 10:07 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen . . . this reminded of Hendrix's, "Bold as Love" he describes his soul in colors Beautiful writing xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, thank you. Nice to catch you here *s M Lori, basically it's the colors in my eyes... and how I see the world. hugs M Bernie, thank you, always a pleasure to see you respond. Ringo ..some lines are true to life, therefore easy to come by. Nice to see you, thanks M Michele, yup darkness too...can't get anything passed you can I? Yes and the return of the dark photo..just me being me and returning to myself the way I was and intend to be.  You cause a smile, Karen with your "oooh...." summed up...feelings and possibilities and you are probably reading me just as it was meant. Linda, hazel eyes can see very colorfully,especially between the lines. New Photo/old look...me going backwards in time and looks to when I was happier..takes some time and some working out..but it is worth it. littlewing, I am very poor on songs and titles..I probably wouldn't remember it. But love the idea of describing a soul in colors. Thank you hugs all M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-18-2003 10:07 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Oh .. to be so *gifted* ... you are a worded-treasure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"but still, I have rainbow eyes" yes! |
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