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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Controls dimly lit gasping for a taste of fuel The highway beckons |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"and I can't drive--FIFTY-FIVE!!!"  OH YES... I know this one somehow. And I don't even drive. grin...but I'm really good at road rage.  Hugs you. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
..and I am dancin' around singing "little red corvette.." hugs for this. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Give in to this voice...and discover what mysteries wait. Lovely words Sue. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I use to get up in the middle of the night and just go for a drive...I just stayed away from the cities and made sure my door was always locked. *s M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I especially liked the dim light. This reminds me of flying down root 66 with the top down. Nice visuals tweets~ |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Night drives....the *b*e*s*t*!!!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Now let's hope there's still plenty of those backroads left, I'd like some taste of Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, your style always amazes me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-17-2003 08:29 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if i see you on the road, i'm going the other way? and watch it girl, was that you flipping me the bird the other day on the thruway? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
eeew Sammy Hagar lol at K..nice write Sue i'd love to hit the highway or be hit on the highway i can't decide |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- Even your achingly short wrties are complete and descriptive and outstanding reads. Is there anything you can't write?? outstanding job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I have nothing enligthening to say, Sue..sorry...lemme read and reread this to let it soak in but want you to know I read it If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ceinwyn's reply was adorable. I have more dials and buttons and controls in my car than I know what to do with!--literally! I'm still finding new gadgets and gizmos!--but I love how they look at night when they are dimly lit!--and I love going for drives in the country when the stars are bright and I hear the sounds of the wild. I have the windows wide open and the air smells so fresh. See, your poem got me off on my own tangent!   EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - now I would make you drive Lady - that would be awesome . . . with my seatbelt on nice and snug of course . . . thank you Thank you Chris, havent listened to that in a very long time . . . Thank you Eric, you saw, didnt you? Kisses back Ethel - thank you Damn Bluesy, you know that is a dream of mine, I dont know if it is still the same but it wouldnt matter much to me . . . now you gave me a nice image - thank you tweets Thank you Shara - definitely Noah . . . was looking at the new Harley's myself . . . the chrome model (?) thank you Michele - LMFAOOOOOO . . . sooooo that was your @$$ mooning me out the car window huh? LMAOOO that was an awesome response thank you and yes the other way Raph - why did the chicken cross the road? Dont answer that lol - thank you Brad, you saw into this didnt you? Thank you Kris! Where have you been? That's ok, just happy to see you here - thank you Linda - yes, it was and I know . . still learning the tricks in mine . . . blushing . . . I just fugured out how to lower the back seats for cargo lol and yes adore the country . . . thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-18-2003 11:42 AM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
short and complete. a virtuoso with the pen gis a trickle of music from a well |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So, tell me. Does that new "Chrysler Discorde" have rich Corinthian leather? I see what you mean Ed |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
You are better at these, than you thought Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you itchy . . . what a beautiful thing to say Ed - ahahahahah . . . there is much to be seen in your own words . . . the Discord and the Corinthian go well together, yes . . *smiling* thank you for seeing Jason thank you so much, now coming from the senyru king himself, that is a huge compliment . . . too sweet Thanks guys xxoo |
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SuperGlueRyan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45Possum Kingdom |
Night driving so much fun. I love how this conveys an image with so few lines. Nice work. ~Ryan |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Me n a friend of mine love our night drives, with the volume up listening to the stones. and the only lights you can see are the dashboard ones and the odd tail lights of another driver. then, of course when we tire of the country roads, we head for the big almighty, trusty bright shining M. Mc Donalds! nice to read you again susie. xx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Ryan - Welcome to PIP! Gemma - yes yes indeed . . . glad to see you back here missy Thanks guys xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - I'm just down the road, thataway... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definitely know this well! awesome write! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill - whichaway? lol thank you Thank you Dix, you got it Thanks guys xxoo |
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