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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-08-17 09:05 AM



very quiet rain
pain rings with every heartbeat
there should be lightening

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-08-17 09:10 AM


Hauntingly sad...yet beautiful.
Much enjoyed.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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2 posted 2003-08-17 10:33 AM


Yep, sometimes a good ]]]]>FLASH-BAAM!!!<[[[[ is what you need more than any amount of tea and sympathy...or drizzle...

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Martie
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3 posted 2003-08-17 11:12 AM


icebox

I like the thought of very quiet rain, but sorry for the pain.  *hugs*

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-08-17 11:25 AM


It's all the noise that reminds you that you are alive...

I love storms, hurricane, even tornado's (as long as they aren't close)...

Nice.

Susan

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-08-17 11:45 AM


That's right. Every snap of the lightening it snaps you away from the thoughts that make you sad. I LOVE storms. Kinda gives that--run to someones arms for safety feeling..then a hug happens...then you feel safe again....What a way to go...

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-08-17 12:13 PM


You discovered the gift of the day, how beautiful.  I like the feel and sound of this.  ~K~
vandana
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7 posted 2003-08-17 12:36 PM


nice
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-08-17 02:34 PM


you are a deep man, very deep
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2003-08-17 02:36 PM


yes my life is a gift but I really should've gotten the receipt 'cause this one blows
gemjop
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10 posted 2003-08-19 09:26 AM


there should.

in awe of yer words icy one.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

KoKo
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11 posted 2003-08-19 10:35 AM


Aah, sometimes my mood must agree with you

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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12 posted 2003-08-19 01:03 PM



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