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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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stave tonight the whittling curling curlicues ignore the patterns gathering the lathering upon the feet fire flickers ambercast tin-type of a photograph sepia and smoke-stain eyes-- the rocking chair chords creak the board. "I smell snow," the woman said. The old man carved, but nodded head. "I'll fetch some wood in from the pile," their eyes met, and then, they smiled. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
lovely Karen.  Chris |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, I was visited last night by some memories as well...hope you enjoy them... as I did this. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yes... and they both smiled... very nice. Susan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful K! Smiling back at you... ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
just so lovely! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. I was just trying to write something with a softer quill this time. I was hoping to achieve that cozy comfortable silence that two people share--this one was inspired by my mom and dad of course.... I've been going through that emotional scrapbook again. Smile. Thanks for reading. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
YES . . . I was simply going to write one word: LOVE xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely lovely Karen, smiling here. thank you Maree. fate is not just |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...this is lovely... You definitely succeeded in portraying that 'cozy comfortable silence', and I can see your mom and dad in this portrait of words. Love and hugs, lady...  "My friends are my estate." |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Karen- You are an amazing artist. This one is absolutely gorgeous... We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A daguerreotype moment, well-captured.  EA |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Very lovely feel to this...almost a still-life photograph in black and white. Excellent writing and craftsmanship though. ***Ivy Rose |
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