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TWENTY OR LESS...#148

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-17 05:04 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#148

Copyright 2003 by: Mark V Sheldon

She played her melody

He could not resist

Enticed and lured
by smooth chortle

She could lead his love

anywhere

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-08-17 05:52 AM

This has a lovely comfortable feel to it.

Easy silences.

Nice.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2003-08-17 06:18 AM

I love this! write me some more!

Bravo!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-17 06:54 AM

Exquisite! Just beautiful!!! How lucky I always feel to read your words. It's as if i'm blessed with a little bit of gold each time I read you. WOW! Amazing as always!

SharaRose @->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-08-17 09:08 AM

"She could lead his love"

Now that's real power ... being able to do that to a man.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-08-17 09:09 AM

anywhere?

This one made me smile Mark.
Nicely said.
~Morning hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2003-08-17 01:19 PM

serenity blaze: ...for a change... Thank you.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce: Soon -- keep a look-out... and thank you.

SharaRose -- you humble me

, but it's a nice feeling.  Thank you kindly.

Janette:  Yes -- truth be told, women have more power than most people understand...

Good morning, Nancy...  Anywhere when the mind's distracted...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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