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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-08-17 01:34 AM


Thank you, M. A. S., for the ability to write this. I love you.


Moonlight Shadow
I love the way your arm looks
Inside your moonlight shadow.
The tracks beneath the renewed skin
The kisses upon them
A feigned cover
Of leftover lipstick--
Fossils of bitten pain
Over your bitter licks of blades.


I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (08-17-2003 01:41 AM).]

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-17 01:42 AM


OOOH, so beautiful!

Nice to see you again, sweets!

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-08-17 01:45 AM


Thank you, Kaoru!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-08-17 07:22 PM


You're back! I was beginning to think that you had left us for good! Glad to see you posting your wonderful poetry again!

MAS must be some inspiration if this poem is any indication!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-08-17 07:57 PM


EA!! Heylo you! Thank you for your sweet words

And yes, he is. He's wonderful

Thanks for your read and taking the time to comment!!! I appreciate it!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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