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Honeybee
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0 posted 2003-08-17 01:23 AM



Blasphemy


"You have my heart,"
he said,
he works "I love you"
in bed,
that he would never stray.

But never is a promise.

How dare he dishonour
the words 'heart' and 'love,'
they are sacred
and snakes are better left under stone.
The lies, disguise, adultery -
the highest sin
and never is a promise
that a real man wouldn't break.

Melissa Long-Monette


© Copyright 2003 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-17 01:27 AM


Wow, amazing work.
Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-08-17 02:06 AM


No but when you hear that while 57% of men in a pool cheat, 52% percent of women also cheat it seems theres not alot of real women out there either. So what have we learned? That both sexes, or humans in generals are simply @&%$&*&#
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-08-17 05:22 PM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
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4 posted 2003-08-17 06:19 PM


How profound.
Sandra

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