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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-08-16 08:59 PM



I still remember the warmth
the heat, the sweat
of close to you
   in New York City..

I remember the lights
along 495
below, to the right
the video peddlers
     in the night.,

air too heavy
and I, too much
too little
    in love with you..

Stuck in the box
on wheels for two
what I want is remembrance
        of you..

the stale to disappear
stars to reappear
outside the window
along 495..

remembrance of love alive.

WhiteRose 08/16/03


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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-08-16 11:37 PM


Keep that memory alive girl. I loved this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-08-17 07:27 PM


Dear Rose of White, it's wonderful to see you again. This is like Welcome Home Week! So many of our Pip friends have come back! This is marvellous!

Memories such as this, can be enjoyed over and over again! No one can take them away from us!


Linda

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
3 posted 2003-08-19 07:14 PM


The L.I.E.....I have so many memories of it. Traffic too long, construction never ending, the city at the end of the tunnel. Thanks for the write
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-08-19 08:51 PM


the L.I.E.
longest parking lot in the country.........
god, bboy you remind me too
this is a memory here white rose

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