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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-16 08:41 PM



Love's Power


If my eyes could speak
the warmth I feel
each time they touch upon your face,
I'd edge a little closer
turn the lights off
hasten pace.

If my lips could spread
the fantasy
that shimmers me when in your fold,
this muse of mine would let me seal
pandoras box
false treasures, hold.

If my arms could round
the body, yours
allowing love its power's seize
the full of moon would never leave
this feel of worth
would virtue, ease

Allowing that so valued great
The chance of had, less time in wait.


M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-16-2003 08:42 PM).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-08-16 08:48 PM


I'll bet you they can...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-08-16 08:51 PM


such romantic words you write so terrifically,,,

     


nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-08-16 08:57 PM


Thank you Mark...

And Glenn..I am just in the right mood tonight~~~

M

SmartChick
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4 posted 2003-08-16 09:45 PM


Beautiful! It is amazing what love can do.
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-08-17 12:40 PM


If my lips could spread
the fantasy
that shimmers me when in your fold,
this muse of mine would let me seal
pandoras box
false treasures, hold.

Well darn it all,  sometimes your writing makes my heart beat fast, and faster.  

This was so beautiful, I wish you love Maureen~

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-08-17 12:43 PM


The touch of whisper on this page.
So much of you here. TD

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2003-08-18 10:20 AM


Sue, loving and being loved can be very wonderful.
hugss and thanks for being you
M

Lori, hmmm you are too much...
It will come when it is  right...
I am just working on myself, preparing for it.



TD, sometimes that is a problem, I leave too much of me on here and then I am empty when on my own.

Thank you
~smiles
M



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