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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-08-16 08:11 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#147

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


darkest words
surface

and sting
like hot barbs

effortlessly ending


your barrels of pellets


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-16 08:20 PM


nice write,,,,

     


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-08-16 08:29 PM



Does not sound like a very pleasant person to be around!--and you got that point across succinctly!

Perhaps you could put up a sounding board to bounce those dark words back to their source!


EA

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3 posted 2003-08-16 08:49 PM


Less Than


soft points
not taken as such,
pierce the meaning,
cause the hurt
to bleed


Good Evening Mark
*s

M

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4 posted 2003-08-17 09:20 AM


Ouch!

Felt this one ... powerful write here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2003-08-17 01:14 PM


Thank you, Q.

EA:  Just an abstract culmination from the past...

Maureen -- if only they were soft...

Janette:  They're "only words", right?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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6 posted 2003-08-17 08:52 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Mark, those kind of words can hurt so much, I know this because when I was a little boy, kids always called me short and "girlish" and retarded because I was shy and wasn't used to speaking and socializing due to the hurtful words, and while it is true I am short for my age and feel that I'm a woman in a mans body somehow, I would never go rubbing it into someones face and respect how that person is as everyone is special! (sad sigh) You speak with true compassion, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-08-17 09:35 PM


Ouch! I needed to read this, at exactly this moment!

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MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2003-08-18 03:17 AM


Noah:  Wouldn't it be an immaculate world if everyone would be honest and not judgemental?  Thanks for sharing and know that you're special and have much to offer anyone willing to give you a chance.

Ratleader:  Really?  Further validation that everything happens for a reason -- glad I could help...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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