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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-16 12:22 PM



The
Gates open
come right in.
I could tell
this invitation
had a different spin.
See if you can
measure up,
Do you fit in?
Are you allowed
to dine and sup?
In this place
You've come to
a fine tooth comb
will scrutinize you.
They will see
Are you like us?
If not
then you
aren't worth
the fuss.
If you don't see
things my way
If you don't
we have
nothing
to say.
I
turned
in a spin
No I do not
conform
to ones
that
are
not
so
warm.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-16 12:48 PM


nicely penned,,,

     


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-16 12:54 PM


No I do not
conform
to ones
that
are
not
so
warm.


A good poem, Shara.  
Hugs  
Ethel


Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-08-16 12:57 PM


Out with those who are chilled
to the bone.

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-16 09:35 AM


Thanks to all of you. Embracing all, costs nothing. We are all the same. No one is better than another. Look at what a person misses by not *letting someone in.* A potential friend for life.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-09-02 09:51 AM


back to the top with you, my friend.
      
Hugs
Ethel

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-09-02 10:35 AM


and a I appreciate this.

Bless ya bunches,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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