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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-15 09:31 PM





a dry leaf drifting
becoming part of the wind
fills me with silence



        

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-15 09:36 PM



a dry leaf drifting
becoming part of the wind
fills me with silence

kind of hypnotic, Q, but real awakening

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
2 posted 2003-08-15 09:53 PM


Short and beautifully powerful.

Jason

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-08-15 11:14 PM


So gentle, and tender. Beautiful
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-08-15 11:16 PM


This is so gentle and caring and romantic. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-08-16 12:15 PM


so touching..like your heart!

~Thanks ARH

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-08-16 02:49 AM


wow, you're good at these!
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2003-08-16 02:54 AM



Yes...love the image this creates.
Nicely done, my friend.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Margherita
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8 posted 2003-08-16 10:37 AM


This is perfect! I love it.
Love, Margherita

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