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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-08-15 07:46 PM



I did lie

Somewhere beneath
your skin

Where wine drooled from
Lips I've sipped 'til
drunk...

You say I am good lier

So I keep lying

Here

With you...

~Tier

© Copyright 2003 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-08-15 08:12 PM


and I long for the truth of a moment such as this...

beautiful, Tiers...


Poe_Pot_Pie
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2 posted 2003-08-15 08:15 PM


I love this! Short and simple with a sweet message! Rock on!
Jason Lyle
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3 posted 2003-08-15 09:52 PM


Short and sweet.Nice one!

Jason

wranx
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4 posted 2003-08-16 01:44 AM


Yep, the best (and only) kind of lie to allow
vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-08-16 01:54 AM



YES...oh, to know this again.
Lovely, Tiersdin.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-16-2003 01:54 AM).]

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2003-08-16 04:24 PM


Thanks all for reading, commenting, & feeling!

*hugs to you all*

~Tier

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-08-16 10:11 PM


Tier . . .

a beautiful image you have left me with
I thank you . . .
xxoo

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-08-16 10:45 PM


There's lying--and then there's oo-la-la lying! Lie away!


EA

RMW
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9 posted 2003-08-18 05:07 PM


Tiers....elegant. Bob
Ceinwyn
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10 posted 2003-08-18 05:47 PM


I agree...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Pilgrimage
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11 posted 2003-08-18 05:55 PM


Well done. That should be the only lying allowed.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2003-08-18 09:51 PM


Tiersdin - glad I read this one, it's a great write...

BC

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13 posted 2003-08-19 08:04 AM


Nicely done my friend..as usual.
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