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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-08-15 07:39 PM


Pray with me ~
                "A rose blood red
                  upon Love's last bed ..."

   pray ...

              Upon - (the air now still)
        I've drawn - (can't breathe at will)
           So gone - (I've lost my soul)

           This dawn, my eyes won't know.


Stay with me ~
                 "Upon Love's last bed
                   good-byes turn blood red ..."

   stay ...

         Good-byes - (is all we've known)
         The lives - (our loves have shown)
          Disguise - (for all our pains)

         Dark skies, here comes the rains ...


Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

[This message has been edited by ctowen (08-16-2003 06:41 AM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-08-15 08:47 PM


awesome
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-08-15 10:00 PM


CTOwen~
Oh ... I like this so much .. I'll second the AWESOME~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
3 posted 2003-08-15 10:03 PM


Great writing.I loved this.

Jason

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2003-08-15 11:36 PM


This is one of your best.....I love all you write, but this is just stunning.....


ALWAYS lil'ole ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-08-15 11:39 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-08-16 02:21 AM


exactly what I was thinking today
vandana
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7 posted 2003-08-17 10:50 AM


enjoyed
gemjop
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8 posted 2003-08-19 09:24 AM


you get better and better.

damn this haunts, aches and relieves.

thankyou.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
9 posted 2003-08-19 09:50 AM


Mmm, this is good...
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