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Teardrop
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Teardrop Emerged as crystal envoy dressed, Your slow descent I barely feel. A single teardrop so expressed -- Reveal to all what I conceal. The essence of the stormy ocean Surging in my heart and soul -- Buried feelings; chained emotion -- Their secrets you so boldly stole. So down you flow in your brief reign Of such a solemn, silent way. Thus wash away the mask I feign -- As truth revealed will seize the day. Then as you close your solo show And leave a stamp of silver seal -- I stand to know what you bestow -- Your journey finds me true and real. CG |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CastleGuard~ This is as tender a penning as I'll read this day~ Beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautifully written. ~Tier |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your write brought forth some feelings I have had about a friend of mine...a close and similar expression. Thank you. TD |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
You have a wonderful command of cadence, rhyme, and expression in a form and stye to which I am especially partial. Back to the top! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
upon reading this, i am not sure if it's the beauty or the perfect rhythm and cadence of this that leaves me more speechless. all i can say is...beautiful! take care amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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