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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-15 06:48 PM

Quietly I Wonder

he has hesitation
I know it
I have come
with my own
set of fears
I want
so badly to
just open up
and tell him
how I feel
I want
to say
it’s ok
I have been
hurt too
so I know
all about
not trusting
I want
to say
move a
little closer
take a risk
maybe this time
it is about
the give
not the take
take this chance
it might be
the right one
but then
I wonder
am I
talking to
him or me
so I
just remain
quiet

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-08-15 06:51 PM

but then
I wonder
am I
talking to
him or me

me too
xxoo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-08-15 06:54 PM

OneSlick~
You keep writing with such 'real' thought~

By all means ... do not 'remain quiet'~
Many a road to understanding has been bridged with the first word~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-15 07:23 PM

One of those times you aren't sure that leap of faith is the right timing. I hope it works out for you.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-15 07:31 PM

terrific thoughts from you, Helen

sometimes it's best to remain quiet..I hardly ever take that advice and that is why I am where I am..I guess.

M

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2003-08-15 11:01 PM

Just do it!

*smile*

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-08-15 11:02 PM

You both
reply..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-08-16 02:24 AM

don't hesitate

and never do anything quietly

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-08-16 10:51 AM

Dare! Great write. Fears can be overcome just by doing what causes your fears.

Speak out.
Love, Margherita

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