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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-15 04:37 PM



Scattered
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Scattered
Thoughts disarrayed
Spilling this ink-of-think
Inking blotches across the rhyme
Indigo moments of quilling combined
Define poetic trait of mine
Gathering momentum
Forever flung
Scattered~


*Just a little encouragement from a good friend inspired this Rictameter*



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2003-08-15 04:49 PM


very nicely penned,
very enjoyable read,,

     


Betty
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2 posted 2003-08-15 07:19 PM


I like this very much.
Betty

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3 posted 2003-08-15 07:33 PM


you sure are gathering momentum
*s

always fun to read your scatterings, Marge

hugs
M

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4 posted 2003-08-16 09:10 AM


Wonderful rictameter, Marge.  I have to try one of these again, I say "vehemently." 'Tis the word of the day it seems.

Hugs,
Patricia

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5 posted 2003-08-16 09:17 AM


Great ricameter Marge!
I had to smile as this reminded me of myself
and my scattered thoughts.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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6 posted 2003-08-16 09:21 AM


Scattered ... ohhh this is me, too, right now.

Nicely penned piece here dear Lady and it looks lovely, too.

Enjoyed with a smile.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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7 posted 2003-08-16 04:42 PM


Dear Marge:  A treat to see and read!  Reading whatever you write, always is a pleasure.

Love
Betty Lou

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8 posted 2003-08-16 04:49 PM


as always...
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9 posted 2003-08-16 11:05 PM


Ah, some days our thoughts are elsewhere and it's hard to concentrate. How well I know this scenerio!

Thank you for 'your' inspiration which came shining through in this piece.

Hugs, Marti


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