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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-15 02:05 PM




please forgive me love
for it
was only my deepest loving
feelings
that caused me to pick your
neighbors roses

     


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-08-15 02:19 PM


so thats where my roses went...
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-08-15 02:22 PM


This is a cute poem. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-15 02:46 PM


This made me smile.Thanks.
angelblueyes

LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-08-15 03:01 PM


ok, that's it, I'm callin the Rose Police...hehehehe, great and thoughtful poem...that is, if your on the receiving end.
Thanks for sharing

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-15 03:42 PM


Watch out...some of those neighbors might have unsympathetic,  unromantic dogs, that bite...James
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-08-15 03:57 PM


I could care less about those neighbors...I just want the Roses!!  

Lovely..

Susan

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-08-15 04:03 PM


Very cute, Q!  You do a wonderful job with these...unfortunately, I have not learned, "less is more."  Although I do have a wonderful friend who reminds me of this constantly.  Perhaps I will try one of these soon.  And with that idea of inspiration...hmmm...seems you presented me with a few of those stolen roses.

Smiles...
Patricia

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-08-15 04:04 PM


lol  very cute

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Martie
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9 posted 2003-08-15 04:18 PM


QJQ

This made me smile...my husband and I own a flower shop and our neighbor once accused him of picking her roses (no he didn't!).

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2003-08-15 04:18 PM


sweet!
QjQ
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11 posted 2003-08-15 09:52 PM


thanks to all of you for your replies,,,

1slick_lady
the_loner_23
angelblueyes
LeeJ
JamesMichael
Susan Caldwell
Patricia
nakdthoughts
Martie
serenity blaze


     


JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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12 posted 2003-08-17 03:39 PM


One's passions can cause
all sorts of spontaneous
acts!

Bless our "blame games"!
Bless our neighbors too!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
13 posted 2003-08-17 03:42 PM



This is adorable, Q.
Thanks for the smile today.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
14 posted 2003-08-17 04:32 PM


lol@helen's reply.

Great write, Q, cute and romantic as always sweets!

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