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vandana
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0 posted 2003-08-15 10:04 AM


I will be there
When all your dreams are broken
I will hold your hand
When you are afaird to be alone
I will be your side
Light the candle
When lights are down
I will hold your hand
When you feel all alone
Don't worry
I will make you feel alright
When the stroms comes
at night
And you feel scared
Let be the one
To hold your hand
If you are alone
And you want somebody
to beside you
I will be right there for you
I will be there
To hold your sweet loving hand
Don't be afaird
Cast fears away
I will be there
When all your dreams are broken
I will be holding your hand

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-15 10:07 AM


very sweet


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garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-15 10:12 AM


Vandana, what a beautiful poem this is.
I enjoyed reading it very much.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-08-15 10:15 AM


Such a tender, love-filled promise!
Love, Margherita

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-08-15 05:01 PM


very nice write,,,,

     


Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-08-15 05:02 PM


Very much enjoyed Vandana!
~Summertime Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-08-15 05:02 PM


sincere and compellingly sweet, vandana.

Enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-08-15 05:37 PM


Lovely...James
Janette
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8 posted 2003-08-16 03:27 PM


Ahhhhhhhh this is so tender and sweet.

Greatly enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2003-08-16 09:20 PM


Hi Vandana, this was just perfect. A wonderful offering to a friend or lover.

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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