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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-15 12:17 PM

heat of which i tire
soaked sheets of water i wish
o sky i pray: rain.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-15 12:18 PM

I know how this is. That describes Florida summers.

Cold hands means a warm heart

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-08-15 12:23 PM

nicely done,,
enjoyed your penning,,

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2003-08-15 12:26 PM

I like this. Thank you for sharing it.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2003-08-15 12:30 PM

and me...i am tired of the rain...time for a little sun...helen

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-08-15 12:42 PM

In a perfect world, we'd have it both ways!

Nice haiku, you~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-08-15 08:58 AM

perfect ... may St. Peter hear!!
Love, Margherita

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2003-08-15 09:10 AM

Kaoru, so few words and so much meaning, I very much enjoy these, thank you for sharing and may it rain and rain.

moisture I desire
turn the heat away for now
may it rain and rain

Be well my friend and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

Ramon
Junior Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 28

8 posted 2003-08-15 09:38 AM

the rain
in spain
fall main
ly on the plain

the rain
in my brain
causing me strain

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-08-15 09:49 AM

nice read

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-08-15 10:13 AM

the heat and humidity are very tiring..
I wish it would just pour and get it over with...

nicely done
M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-08-15 10:30 AM

Meghan, I love these short verses. Don't you?

Hugs

Ethel

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2003-08-15 03:13 PM

I suddenly find myself wanting to drown ...

If only it could be as simple!

(keep an umbrella handy)

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-08-15 03:23 PM

We've had rain ,but need more.Had too many fires here.Liked the way you described this.
angelblueyes

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2003-08-15 05:31 PM

Please send me some of that heat! It's cold down here brrrrr.

I love your Haiku

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2003-08-15 05:43 PM

After two weeks of rain i say no friggin more.. but as fer your words..bring em on..grin

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

16 posted 2003-08-16 02:20 AM

i wish as well...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

17 posted 2003-08-16 02:21 AM

come to Florida

we have plenty

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