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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I brave the pavement up a hill I look to my right then to my left I cross where two roads meet alluring me. I do it all with my feet and I do not understand I do not know yet of grief that travels low over ground silently with a slide show of the past. fate is not just |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is full of truth. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The past is like a slide show that I don't care to watch...even if it is easier said than done!! It's almost like excess baggage. Anyway, I enjoyed your perspective and I thank you for allowing me my take. It's always good to read you Maree~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Most of mine seems like a slide show given by a neighbor I hardly know....at least, when I compare it with the intensity of the present....here, lemme show ya some of mine... Notice how everybody keeps picking up on that image? That's cuz it's so darned good, and brings a response from every person who reads it. Nice work! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Interesting...grief really is a reaction to something that happened already...never thought of it quite like you have in this well done poem. As always, you write from a deep place.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maree, I really enjyed reading your poem, as i always do. Thanks for sharing with us. Hugs Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I know the slide show...seems that far too often the good slides flash quickly in my mind and the "bad" slides stay fixed. A great write! Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, when you told me last night [my night, your morning] that you were writing, I didn't know what to expect. Now...I don't know what to say. Sometimes I like it when someone leaves me speechless... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-15-2003 07:06 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Seems you've made that hill somewhat less daunting... I'll say it again. "You do this so well" Ed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I hear the whisperings when I walk too. I was with you every step, Luscious.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
too many slideshows..i need more dirty movies..preferably home made..grins |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree: it's the crossing of the roads that frightens me . . . or is it the standing at the threshold of? Either way . . . a strenuous flight . . . xxoo |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It's our pasts that make us who we are today, however painful they may have been - and hopefully...they help to prepare us for what's to come. Love your words!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yep, the slide show follows, somehow, sometime, somewhere good words here |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
maree- as always your words leave an impression upon my heart and soul. this is no exception. i'll write you soon. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I had a response to each one of you but then lost it all. How I don't know. Anyway... I want to thank each one of you for popping in and reading and your lovely and warm replies. Maree fate is not just |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is really good, I can't believe I missed it. And Raph, you should stop being so perverted! lol Great write, toots  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It's this sort of flashing slide show imagery that seems to be my sole "entertainment" sometimes. Nicely done Ed |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Oh, wow.... This is wonderful. I know this feeling all too well. Well done. Kielo |
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