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psalm (repost of the first post--from Open 5)
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psalm (repost of the first post--from Open 5) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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let me cry in the tongue of angels so that bitterness be made beauty agony to harmony within a choir of seraphim so that any who will hear have ears only for the jubilee of "holy, holy, holy..." in resounding hum quiver first in sweet refrain build note upon exquisite note sustain and burst in exaltation. to touch, to heal... as it was meant to be. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Let us dance in glory, as it was meant to be. Awesome writing Karen, and in open 5!I am but a noob. Jason |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful words these are Cold hands means a warm heart |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I am glad to have read this I have wanted to see this from the very tip of your iceberg.... to the unseen bottom I swim  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
One can but hope, that such a gift is received in kind... ~yeti |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Let us dance in glory." Yes let us, let us...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is lovely...I so enjoyed your beautiful thoughts this early morning. Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Open 5!?!?!? How many lives have you lived? And can I place my order for the my next one? digress... Loved it Karen! Why must you always make me break out the dictionary? (thats actually www.dictionary.com these days...) Love you! Susan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read my friend  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful Karen. Thankyou for reposting this. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all. I do genuinely despair when an apology remains unaccepted. I grieve for me and grieve for them as well. Everybody loses. Sad, but? Not much more I can do. Thanks for reading. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...you're right...there isn't much more that you, or any of us, can do in a situation such as this...and you shouldn't have to. It's unfortunate when someone chooses to let a friendship die, rather than swallow their pride and open their heart to forgive. You know I feel this one... Big hugs to you, lady...love you...  "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-15-2003 04:16 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Let us dance in glory, as it was meant to be lovely penning,, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Started off with a bang and still bringing down the house..cliches anyone |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karen . . . this brought tears to my eyes it really did - the whole thing If I must weep let me cry in the tongue of angels so that bitterness be made beauty you sing beautifully . . . xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in sweet refrain build note upon exquisite note sustain and burst in exaltation. ~*~ The feel of that build... is an exquisite pain... well done, m'friend... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to my lovely friends. And? hey, call me stubborn, or tenacious? But I do not give up. If I have keep hope for others, perhaps there is some hope for me? Love to ALL. ) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have been out of the loop so to speak these past few days and have only had moments to catch on here...but I noticed (while with these two "delightful" children I am sitting for the 8th day...*exhausted*)you no longer have an email address...so if you do find the time I would appreciate it if you might send me a note..so I can remain in touch with you, when the mood so moves me as it has this evening, Karen.a lovely psalm ~smiles~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--as ye give, so shall ye receive!  EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
With love and hugs, my friend Ethel  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Beautiful... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ok, had to go through hoops to get here *smile* deleted my cookies as I was gonna be away from my computer for a while...took me a bit just to make PIP believe I am who I say I am ...rofg this touches me to my spirit....makes tears well up.....beautiful, beautiful |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
bless you this did something to me...touched my temporary cold heart...even made me choke up a bit... Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
My, how you have changed . . . |
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