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Open Poetry #28

Following The Birds

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-14 04:22 PM

Following The Birds

birds run
through air
they trip
the wind
as they
make their
way around
playing across
serious clouds
laughing deliriously

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-14 04:25 PM

Yeah, I do know.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-15 02:13 AM

cool

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-08-15 09:27 PM

total glee.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-08-15 09:52 PM

OneSlick~
You are just SO REAL~

'they trip
the wind'

I LOVE IT !
*Huglets* sweet lady~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-08-16 08:30 PM

very nice write,,,

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-08-19 09:03 AM

you made this gloomy face smile!

they trip the wind. love it. so clever, so true.

library!

thankyou! xxxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-08-19 10:31 AM

Beautiful language!
Eric

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-08-20 09:36 AM

You do know that there ought to be a book of you...right? You do know that?

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alisa
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since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

9 posted 2003-08-20 11:29 PM

wonderful, i love it...

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-20 11:35 PM

Exactly the reason I wish I had wings . . .
*smile*
xxoo

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

11 posted 2003-08-20 11:37 PM

Enjoyed this.
Crystal

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