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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-14 03:24 PM



Written On The Wind

There is something written on the wind tonight
I hear it singing my name
Softest notes of loves' emote
calling in gentle refrain~

Breezes blowing you about my mind
sending sweet shivers up my spine
I feel you on the wind this night
Oh, babe ... can't wait until morning light~

You'll come borne on lightest breeze
calling from among my memories
Sending warmth on cradled caress
Love, oh love ...
moments like these, I love best~


~Inspire cradled by the beautiful breezes blowing across the yard
and also by my sweetie's singing~
*Bill, Love, oh love, this one's for you*



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-08-14 03:29 PM


We have some nice trade winds over here right now to cool down the ninety degree weather...15 to 25...I am embracing the sweet wind...James
Betty
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2 posted 2003-08-14 04:23 PM


This is so pretty & as usual I can feel your love for Bill in it. I know he loves it when you do this.
Love,
Betty

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3 posted 2003-08-14 05:16 PM


Oh so beautiful...I hope to know these lovely words in my own life some day.

Just lovely, Marge.

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-08-14 07:07 PM


Marge - now that must have been one nice breeze across the yard...

BC

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5 posted 2003-08-14 08:19 PM


Dear Marge:  Really a beautiful poem! Sometimes, it does seem there are new messages in the wind.

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2003-08-15 12:26 PM


Marge, it's easy to see who this was for..

hugs
M

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7 posted 2003-08-16 06:09 PM


Very beautiful Marge.

Take care.......Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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8 posted 2003-08-16 07:51 PM


soft summer breezes murmer many romantic words,,

beautifully penned,,

     


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9 posted 2003-08-16 08:56 PM


Oh, now Marge, this is just so cooling. A nice glass of iced tea or lemonade on the porch swing and I can't think of a more peaceful or restful scene.

Love this ... huggles

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10 posted 2003-08-17 07:16 PM


This poem was all the more special when I read of your inspiration!

& appreciative smiles!
Linda

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11 posted 2003-08-17 07:27 PM


Oh, how soft and lovely Marge! Very nice indeed. hugs, Chris

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That perches in the soul ~
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12 posted 2003-08-28 04:43 PM


Very good marge
a very soft warm wind
touching all of our hearts


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13 posted 2003-08-28 09:09 PM


very touching, warm and soft
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14 posted 2003-08-28 09:29 PM


Marge...As always beautiful words flow from your mind just like the cool breeze flows across your yard. I'm sure Bill will love this. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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