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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-08-14 03:01 PM


My mind has been restless and so full
Of thoughts of you that I believe it is
In a space too small and should you wonder
I cannot explain to your satisfaction
This obsessive suffering that brings
Happiness and forgetting myself entirely
With thoughts of you

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (08-14-2003 05:56 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-14 03:20 PM


A completely selfless poem...

well done, Robert!

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3 posted 2003-08-16 03:17 PM


What immediately comes to mind is this ... if the thoughts bring you this much joy then ... keep on thinking of her.

Enjoyed your thoughts.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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