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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-08-14 12:56 PM




I awake with the rising of the sun
My focus is true
Nervous and giddy
Are the feelings that erupt
No timid flare-up mind you
But a long and loud barrage of thunder smashing
And crashing high in the heavens
As I realize the storm that draws near
Is not in the sky
But in my Heart and Soul
Trying to break out and scream
The words you await to hear

But I ask that you please understand
That this is no easy task
It takes some spunk and nerve for me to admit
The bottom line in this relationship
The very essence of our core
Begs that I rally my resolve
And speak my thoughts
I need not sensitivity
But compassionate eyes
And affectionate ears
As I whisper
What you want to hear

I ask your forgiveness
I beg your pardon
Over my male ignorance
I ask that you exonerate me of my stupidity
And make amends with this fool
Who is only silly and unquestionably
In love with you even before the day that I said

I DO!

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (08-14-2003 12:57 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-08-14 01:18 PM


May all that you so poetically requested, be granted!


EA

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-14 02:13 PM


May all that you desire come true."squeeze:
angelblueyes

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3 posted 2003-08-14 02:41 PM


very touching and made me smile big
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-08-15 09:03 AM


I am always very touched when someone is able to ask to be forgiven! That's a wonderful quality and hopefully it will be granted to you.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-08-15 09:51 PM


Oh....this deserves to be read, my friend...

up up you go!

I loved this.

Janette
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6 posted 2003-08-16 03:23 PM


Ohhhhhhhh the wifey has got to love love love this piece cause it sure did make me sigh and say out loud ... Ahhhhhhhhh.

Sweet read here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Thomas119gold
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7 posted 2003-08-21 09:01 AM


Thank you both
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