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... MoUtH CaNcEr ... (No Cure For The Disease)
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... MoUtH CaNcEr ... (No Cure For The Disease) |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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... MoUtH CaNcEr ... (No Cure For The Disease) one voice can alter words.. and audible prequel to an uproar spoken words start wars leaving people wanting more its not whats said that leaves minds fed its the drama.. verbal disease..infectious how it spreads person to person - he said she said... human contact airborne .. sounds travel from ear to ear catching the attension causing tension amongst peers intravenous - words get beneath ya skin in sentence fragments problems remain past tense when beef is absent oftebn we judge a book by its cover judging one another.. discuaaing the topic of color incognito... avoiding confrontation...verbal altercations duckin the truth when it appears in our location a world without words is quiet as kept im more of a mime walking <-- id rather use body language than wasting my breath....talking |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So that's what it's called, "Mouth Cancer"--now I know! Thank you for enlightening me! lol  A very interesting right write!  EA |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
Interesting write, indeed. I like it alot. My only critique - bone up on the spelling. I found a couple of typos. Aside from that, you're in the zone. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
id rather use body language than wasting my breath....talking yeah, i know this great stuff ghost |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
thanx for the feedback.. yeah i knew i had typos.. i wrote thi searly in the mroning <-- mor eliek typed it up..so i apologise for typos.. glad ya read it...thanx |
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