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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-08-14 10:44 AM



I’m freefalling ,

Into the abyss,

I wish I had been more neutral,

Just like the Swiss.

Why did I kill all the good inside me?

Tortured words from a troubled mind,

I guess that’s the story off mankind.

Despairs cold grip is tugging at me,

I’ve been cursed just like the fig tree.

At least the rain hides my tears.


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-08-14 11:45 AM



You did a great job of convincing me that you are in a state of despair! I really felt your pain and disillusionment.

"I wish I had been more neutral,

Just like the Swiss."---Cleverly stated!

Warm, healing hugs,
EA

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