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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-08-14 10:35 AM


written for a freind whos adopted daughter died
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Tif: now in heaven smiling down on all of us

Your left our side
Knocked on heavens door
Stepped through pearly gates
Into the afterworld

I stood by your shell
Not wanting to leave
Staring at your after-remains
Hoping you’d breath
Just one more time
Till I said my goodbye

Instand you lay still
No breathe came or went
Motionless you lay
Your soul lost to the clouds

Tears of sorrow
Flowed down my face
And fall to the floor
Of this hurt strucken place

Tonight they took my friend
From this world
She didn’t even deserve to go
Guess now we will never know
What other greatness she would of brought
Into lifes on this world

Instand she looks down
On the people she adores
Wishing happiness
To all that she knows

Knowing in time
We’ll both meet again
In the paradise above
Named the heavens of love

There we would sit
On soft white clouds
Id admire your wings
You been an angel after all

There we would laugh
As we catched up on time
No tears of pain
To be spilt anymore
Just happiness
Forever and forever more

As all our friend we once knew on earth
Join us one at a time
As the years travel by
Building this heavenly family

And there we would stay
Happy forever
Never leaving each other again
Not having to fear

Now still on earth
I wait for that day
When we create the family
Which will last forever…


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-08-14 11:20 AM


How truly tragic. Such a loss can never be forgotten, but hopefully with the passing of time, the pain will soften and only warm memories remain.

Sending my love and healing hugs to your friend--and to you for such a caring heart.


Linda


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2003-08-15 10:34 AM


Such a sad event. It really hurts, but your words are very beautiful dear Lee. I am sure she smiles down on you grateful for your gift of love.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2003-08-15 03:56 PM


"When we create the family that will last forever."    Always sad to lose someone we care for...I embrace this,  so much hope and beauty, to hold on to, to look forward to...James
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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4 posted 2003-08-15 04:01 PM


SUch sadness and loss, but also such hope and happiness to come.My thoughts and prayers arwe with all involved ehreA great write to them from you.
angelblueyes

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5 posted 2003-08-15 07:05 PM


Lee~
I hope you truly know how touching this is~
Just so very delicately beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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