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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-08-20 10:37 AM


“TO NOT CAST AWAY’
by inkedgoddess & Bill Charles
~~~~
Can you see
the softness
beyond the woman,
can you feel the warmth
after you have your way with her,
can you find the poet and the goddess,
and will she stay the same for you
after you're done with her…
……………………..
To gaze into eyes
of a woman in tenderness,
to see her in ways of her dreams,
understanding desires wanting, yearning,
yet not to forget with a touch, for
but of a gaze I discover the poet goddess
who stays in passion for a simple
embrace, one to cherish, too
keep, to not cast away…
~~~~


© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-08-20 10:43 AM


This was beautiful...Bill I very much hope and pray with time...people will become more aware of the hearts of others, instead of their own desires...but to wish to treat each other with respect...consideration for their feelings..not take advantage of them....

Thank you...this serves both male and female
humanity....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-08-20 11:13 AM


Once again another wonderful duet from you two!
Very much enjoyed!
~Hugs to you both~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-08-20 03:18 PM


Amazing work you guys.
QjQ
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4 posted 2003-08-20 03:29 PM



*
~*~
*~* > romantically wonderful < *~*
~*~
*

     


Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
5 posted 2003-08-20 05:02 PM


Great work from two of the finest

Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-20-2003 05:02 PM).]

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2003-08-20 05:31 PM


Tender and beautiful.... a terrific collaboration

Enjoyed.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


vandana
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7 posted 2003-08-20 07:18 PM


nice duet
bklynboy
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8 posted 2003-08-20 08:20 PM


Very nice write...I am jealous that Bill gets to write with Michele.....Hmmmmmmmmm
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-08-20 09:45 PM


thanks for reading, and thank you bill, again
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