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An Unhappy Unstory
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An Unhappy Unstory |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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An Unhappy Unstory every night of it she walks alone down Haters’ Lane can’t get enough and the whole town knows it but still she drags ‘em in and when enough are unthere she tells ‘em all the unsweet lies undangles the bait of her, unmakes up tales to please the uninitiates, about how unsoft she is, how unlonely she’s become oh, and how she unseeks this or that one, untries, unbegs unnotices undoes and unsays, while her unfriends eat it up afraid to unattend, unwishing to eat the consequences [This message has been edited by Ratleader (08-14-2003 05:55 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa, had to read it twice...wow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a dreary, unfulfilling unexistence she's chosen... and how well you write this woman undone. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ Should one reply that this was uninteresting ... would be an untruth~ Rocking write~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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