Divine Sign, You Are My...Goddess

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Open Poetry #28

Divine Sign, You Are My...Goddess

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-13 11:35 PM

I think you are my sign I
made a wish on my eye
lash
my one true sign you
know mother
goddess, goddess
divine you

are my

one
true sign

my wish
simplistic enough
to be granted you are

my

divine sign
my
sign one eye
lash echos

you
divine sign one
true
sign

you are

behind my
eye

lash.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (08-13-2003 11:36 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-13 11:37 PM

Very interesting

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-14 12:36 PM

There's an airiness to this..partly word placement partly the repetition..a chant in the wind..or somethin..
shrugs

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-14-2003 02:50 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-08-14 06:26 AM

i find my true love in spaces that the sky
allows

my painted ponies in the clouds above

behind the eyelash, is where it enters somehow too

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-08-14 09:13 AM

Loved it!

Susan

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-08-14 01:15 PM

such a nice write,,,

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

6 posted 2003-08-14 01:37 PM

Amazing! I can't even begin to describe the feeling it gives me. I'm curious now, have you ever been published?

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-08-15 09:47 AM

You have taken the Goddess in .... beautiful!
Love, Margherita

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-08-15 09:49 AM

enjoyed

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2003-08-15 11:54 AM

smile--at first I thought you had described the eye of horus--but after a number of reads, methinks you have uncovere the discovery of the goddess within.

Smile. Easy enough to find her in you.

MoniDaPoet
Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 73
California, USA

10 posted 2003-08-15 12:26 PM

I love this piece. You have such a gift!

I have only my genius to declare!

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