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Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-08-13 06:04 PM

Sifting sun for us,
pine needles carefully choose
the prettiest rays

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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1 posted 2003-08-13 06:14 PM

Oh I love Haiku's and this is ever so pretty Ed.

Enjoyed.

Maree

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-08-13 07:31 PM

I can visualize it! Beautiful in its simplicity!

EA

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-13 08:54 PM

beautiful image Ed i love shadowplay and lightbreaks in photography and this is why

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-08-13 09:42 PM

Oh yes, the visuals are striking.
Nice write Ed. TD

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-08-13 10:11 PM

Ratleader - and in the mountains of the pines they sure do...

BC

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-08-13 10:18 PM

Lovely words you have chosen here,
as well as the thought you put into them.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-13-2003 10:20 PM).]

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

7 posted 2003-08-13 11:46 PM

***FANTASTIC***

BRAVO

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

8 posted 2003-08-13 11:57 PM

Very nice! Thank you for sharing it.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2003-08-14 02:39 AM

awesome!

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

10 posted 2003-08-14 02:43 AM

Haikus rule, especially the one's on the Simpson's when they take a vacation to Japan.

Anywho, I really liked this one.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

11 posted 2003-08-14 10:59 AM

What a lovely picture you've painted with your pen... thank you for capturing those sunbeams for us. *S*

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

12 posted 2003-08-14 11:00 AM

enjoyed

Martie

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California

13 posted 2003-08-15 12:11 PM

Ed

Isn't it wonderful how such a simple thing can bring such pleasure...just as this poem does.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2003-08-15 07:26 AM

What Raph said....

beautiful!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

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Pennsylvania

15 posted 2003-08-15 07:48 AM

needle shade is different then leaf shade, this poem seems to silently say that...excellent haiku...ice

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

16 posted 2003-08-15 07:52 AM

Seed laden pine cones
Nestling midst fallen needles
Tomorrow's for rest

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