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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-08-13 04:56 PM



morning returns by the window
and the day's first thoughts
begin again with you,

all in the same breath
my heart becomes full and empty
reflecting upon my love for you,

by now i've come to know
that you're the wind that i will never catch,

the dazzling colors of the rainbow
that dissolve as they are simultaneouly born,

the snowflakes that disappear,
while  i try in vain
to savor their beautiful taste
upon my lips,

by now i've come to know,
that any validity given to us in the real world,
could never parallel
the storybook romance
where you so lovingly let me
write the story of us,

by now i've come to know,
that any man who fed my dreams, my heart, my soul, my imagination,
over the last few years
at a time when i so desperately needed this,
is best treasured as the angel
that saved me from falling off this ledge

*** thanks again, R for catching me today ******

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-13-2003 04:58 PM).]

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-08-13 04:57 PM


very touching,,,

     


Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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2 posted 2003-08-13 09:20 PM


Amazing writing so of course its down on the list with only one response..
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-08-13 09:23 PM


thanks Q

raffi,,,,,,,,,,,youre the man,
thanks for the bump

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-08-14 03:12 AM


*silent*
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-14 05:12 AM


Silky...James
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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6 posted 2003-08-14 10:55 AM


Michele . . . I adore this line

the angel
that saved me from falling off this ledge

yes, many angels indeed . . .
but maybe only one with wings of gold
beautiful Michele
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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7 posted 2003-08-14 12:25 PM


"that any man who fed my dreams, my heart, my soul, my imagination,
over the last few years
at a time when i so desperately needed this,
is best treasured as the angel"

I love how you have been writing lately...

As for this:  "at a time when i so desperately needed this"...I know all about that...oh yes..the need to still feel wanted, the need for comfort..support...acceptance...yes I know it.

Susan

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
8 posted 2003-08-19 09:33 AM


Michele....speechless, silent, warmed, content.



thank god or whoever for those people.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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