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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-08-13 01:50 PM




Ocean scents float through my open window
Waves whispering duets
Summer’s kiss after kiss…after kiss
I hear the moon recline…
Bringing in high calming tides
Floating on the backs of sea gulls
Your voice reaches with lavender
Purest essence settles me
In my poetic wine…red and sweet
You are my blood, my flesh my mind
A light evening breeze begs for you arms
Warming me…capturing my unbroken attention
Under the blanket of the moon…where night exposes
New dimensions….there we both gaze in gentle slumber
Across the cup of morning, driving us to the 11th floor
With our hands around time…and pockets full of rose petals
We walk undressed with the honeyed lips of embrace
Beneath faint echoes of the sea
Where paradise stretched our minds
Enamored by warm memories
And the warm moist breath of liquid gold
You are a radiant gleam of art
Reflection of light in ocean waves
The excited sighs of a child
The enigma of fragrance a river emits
The sound of the flow…feeling the green of Ireland
Holding my free spirit…not to tightly
But in a tone only true love knows
Melodic fellowship…of a twelve string guitar
Classical sounds of heavenly moments


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-08-13 02:01 PM


enjoyed the penning,,,

     


Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2003-08-13 02:36 PM


i enjoyed it too

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-08-13 11:09 PM


You have perfectly illustrated, that there can be heaven on Earth!


EA

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-08-13 11:12 PM


I loved the whole thing. It sounds so perfect.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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