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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-08-13 11:11 AM


Love Goes

I gave it all I had
and now I wonder why
she treated me so bad.
Still I know, thats the
way that love goes.

It doesn't work everytime.
Sometimes it succeeds
and it fails sometimes.
I know, thats the way
that love goes.

I won't let love
get me down.
I'll keep
looking around.
For I know, thats
the way that
love goes.

JamesLee
August13
2003

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Nightshade
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1 posted 2003-08-13 11:49 AM


James, you have such a romantic heart and mind. I would love to write so easily of such things...but cannot seem to put my thoughts on paper....not the mushy stuff anyway. Now...I am not saying your poetry is mushy...oh dear I have gotten myself into a mess again and Enchantress is out of town...umm...better go...hee hee....you know I love your poetry! hee hee... hugs, Chris
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2 posted 2003-08-13 12:03 PM


Yep, James...that's the way love goes, my friend.
Sometimes, that is...
Hugs  
Ethel

Tequilia_Sunrise
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3 posted 2003-08-13 12:07 PM


I love this, you sound like such a postive person. Its nice to hear!

Tequilia

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-08-13 12:07 PM


It is sad when love takes a wrong turn~

You've got the right idea James, it's not worth giving up!!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-13 06:06 PM


Thank you Nightshade, garysgirl, Tequilia and BluesSerenade for the nice responses.
Love will not always work because we have no control over the others heart...however, we do have control over ours and if we can learn not to invest to much unless we are sure that the other shares our feelings perhaps we can have more success and less failure.
Nightshade I remember you wrote "No Thoughts of You" in Open 27, one of my favorites, full of feelings and emotions...James  

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